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Sloan MIT MBA Application Essays 2010-2011

Sloan MIT Cover Letter

Prepare a cover letter (up to 500 words) seeking a place in the MIT Sloan MBA Program. Describe your accomplishments and include an example of how you had an impact on a group or organization. Your letter should conform to standard business correspondence and be addressed to Mr. Rod Garcia, Director of MBA Admissions.

Sloan MIT Cover Letter Tips

Write a formal sales document in cover letter format which highlights your key achievements, includes a leadership or team impact example,  explains why you should be admitted to MIT Sloan and also mentions why you are interested in Sloan MIT...gasp.. And yes, this will also act as your "goals essay" (unless you plan to do that in the supplemental information essay - not a great idea!). Now, what could be simpler?!

Since the other essays offer only single-episode snippets of your life, this essay is where you try to make a wholesome presentation of your self/candidature.

Why Sloan MIT is the best option for you AND why you will be a great addition to Sloan are critical components of this essay that need to be dealt with application, research and intelligence. Look beyond cutting/pasting info gleaned from the Sloan website and make a compelling argument that answers "Why is the Sloan MBA the BEST business school program for you?". This unasked question will be critical not only for your online application but also later in your interview. Personalize your answer as much as possible and plausibly connect what Sloan specifically (and if possible, uniquely) offers you and your future goals. Some of the themes that you could use to link with Sloan MIT would be career progression and goals. Convince the admissions committee that your life and work have offered you the experiences, skills and knowledge that (together with the Sloan experience) will make your goals achievable. Ensure that your goals are presented with credibility, practicality and achievability and have an obvious fit with Sloan.

Briefly showcasing your accomplishments (related to work, academic, personal etc.) and trying to align them with the word-picture that you are presenting of yourself would be the next step. Some of this can also be accomplished while detailing your career progression. Since this is an all-purpose essay (oops.. cover letter) a holistic picture of your candidature needs to be presented; also choose the right example to detail your "impact on a group or organization" such that it merges with the overall theme of your cover letter content.

Go for it!

Sloan MIT Essay 1

Please describe a time when you went beyond what was defined, expected, established, or popular. (500 words or less, limited to one page)

Sloan MIT Essay 1 Tips

Try to identify an instance when you found yourself introducing an innovative concept, taking a principled yet unpopular stand, fighting popular opinion, or implementing an out-of-the-box solution. The context can be professional or personal.

Give the context, rationale and motivations for your action, and make apparent why it should be considered "beyond what was defined, expected, established, or popular". Illustrate the path that led from your thought process to the action to the results. The positive changes made possible by your action would underline the strength of the story and your achievement. Ideally the example would showcase your strength of character, robust value system, innovation, reasoning ability and/or intellectual courage.

Though is essay is the exact same as last year's, the response might be different because of the new essay # 2. The focus, this time, will have to be primarily (even exclusively) on the action and not on the persuasive skills since that is the designated focus in the very next essay.

Like in all essay packages, but even more so in this Sloan application, make the final choice of the example keeping in mind the content, theme and examples you have picked for the other essays.

Sloan MIT Essay 2

Please describe a time when you convinced an individual or group to accept one of your ideas.

Sloan MIT Essay 2 Tips

Choosing the appropriate story from your life is a key ingredient of success in all MBA "story" essays. Select a story for this one that shines a light on your ability to persuade, this essay could simultaneously showcase your leadership aptitude, people skills and emotional intelligence. The example should detail the context and rationale for your idea. It should also illustrate your approach in winning the opposition over to the idea - by understanding the opposition, communicating convincingly, clarifying ideas. Your leadership approach and the methodology you adopt would be critical to this essay's success.

Ideally, this essay will showcase your diplomatic communication, persuasive skills, leadership  and effective reasoning - AND end the story with overall consensus (everybody lives happily ever after!). Bear in mind that this is not a randomly selected trait. This story should act as a preview of how you might be able to persuade your classmates at Sloan or your colleagues in a post-Sloan scenario to accept an idea they are opposed to.

Please ensure that the story differs thematically and in approach from the earlier essay, since persuasion and an unpopular stand are similar underlying themes in both essay questions. And lemme repeat: make the final choice of the example keeping in mind the content, theme and examples you have picked for the other essays.

Go for it!

Sloan MIT Essay 3

Please describe a time when you took responsibility for achieving an objective. (500 words or less, limited to one page)

Sloan MIT Essay 3 Tips

Once again a new essay prompt, it is similar to this question from 2008-2009 : "Please tell us about a time when you executed a plan."

Describe in detail the process, actions and steps that you took to achieve your objective and to convert an idea on paper into tangible actuality. While you could achieve the objective individually, one in which you had a leadership role will almost always have greater value. In addition the initiative you took to grab this particular opportunity might be an added dimension in this essay.

The heart of the essay would be your approach to executing ideas - how you visualize, manage, organize, plan, synchronize, and execute.

Like in all the Hallmark Sloan essays the purpose is to judge your approach and attitude in a previous situation since that might be reflection of your manner and method in future situations (at Sloan and later) as well.

Sloan Supplemental Information Essay

You may use this section to address whatever else you want the Admissions Committee to know.

Sloan Supplemental Information Essay Tips

As usual an optional essay requires effort even if you don’t write it. The main question in any optional essay is to decide whether you need to write it at all. Attempt the Sloan MIT supplemental essay only if you feel that it will improve the factual and material strength of your application.

Use this Sloan optional essay to explain shortfalls in your application which you feel are truly detrimental to your candidature. Areas of underperformance (academic or professional or GMAT) or events which stick out (gaps in your resumes or a previous MBA) can be commented on if you have an explanation that is intelligent, interesting and credible.

One other situation when the Sloan MIT supplemental essay is acceptable is when you need to describe at length an strongly positive information that CANNOT be accommodated in the other Sloan essays. The essay does not have to be limited to a single theme or event. If you are certain that this new essay is a robust constructive addition to your candidacy, start working on it!

Sloan MIT MBA Application Essays 2009-2010

First get the basic principles right and then move on to the Sloan essay tips 2009-2010.

We are interested in learning more about you and how you work, think, and act. For each essay, please provide a brief overview of the situation followed by a detailed description of your response. Please limit the experiences you discuss to those which have occurred in the past three years. In each of the essays please describe in detail what you thought, felt, said, and did.

Sloan MIT Cover Letter

Prepare a cover letter (up to 500 words) seeking a place in the MIT Sloan MBA Program. Describe your accomplishments and include an example of how you had an impact on a group or organization. Your letter should conform to standard business correspondence and be addressed to Mr. Rod Garcia, Director of MBA Admissions.

Sloan MIT Cover Letter Tips

Write a formal sales document in cover letter format which highlights your key achievements, includes a leadership or team impact example,  explains why you should be admitted to MIT Sloan and also mentions why you are interested in Sloan MIT...gasp.. And yes, this will also act as your "goals essay" (unless you plan to use the fourth Sloan essay to that purpose).

The "impact impact on a group or organization" portion is new this year and tries to compensate for editing out last year's first Sloan essay question: "Please tell us about a time when you had an impact on a group or organization. Describe in detail what you thought, felt, said, and did." Since this is an all-purpose essay a holistic picture of your candidature needs to be presented. Choosing an "impact example" that merges with the overall theme of your cover letter content would help things.

Sloan MIT Essay 1

Please describe a time when you went beyond what was defined, expected, established, or popular. (500 words or less, limited to one page)

Sloan MIT Essay 1 Tips

Try to identify the times when you found yourself fighting popular opinion, introducing an innovative concept, taking a principled yet unpopular stand or implementing an out-of-the-box solution. The context can be professional or personal.

Apart from your motivations for the action, it might be useful to show how you (tried to) win over unenthusiastic or hesitant stakeholders, since your action would/should not have been easy to accept by everyone. While it is not essential that this be a "success" story where ultimately everyone agrees with your point of view, it won't serve you ill if you showcased your diplomatic communication, persuasive skills and reasoning abilities - AND end the story with overall consensus (everybody lives happily ever after!). A display of your strength of character, robust value system, and/or intellectual courage might be adequate to polish off the essay.

Like in all essay packages, but even more so in this Sloan application, make the final choice of the example keeping in mind the content, theme and examples you have picked for the other three essays.

Sloan MIT Essay 2

Please describe a time when you coached, trained, or mentored a person or group. (500 words or less, limited to one page)

Sloan MIT Essay 2 Tips

Each person has knowledge and qualities that grant him or her the potential to lead in extraordinary ways. Leadership is the most focused-on single trait that almost all Business Schools look for: Sloan is no exception. This essay prompt demands a sharp focus on the coaching/teaching/mentoring aspect of your leadership.

Choosing the appropriate story from your life is a key ingredient of success in most MBA "story" essays. Selecting the story for this one should be easy. Search out a story that shows you impacting an individual or a group (preferable) through exceptional training/mentoring/coaching. Select an instance in which your ability to coach, guide and/or impart knowledge made a significant difference.

As usual apart from describing the story and celebrating your success, the objective of the essay is also to uncover your attitude and approach towards leadership/mentoring/coaching/training. The story therefore will also act as a preview of how you might be able to coach/mentor individuals or teams at Sloan or in your post-Sloan career.

Go for it!

Sloan MIT Essay 3

Please describe a time when you took responsibility for achieving an objective. (500 words or less, limited to one page)

Sloan MIT Essay 3 Tips

Once again a new essay prompt, it is similar to this question from 2008-2009 : "Please tell us about a time when you executed a plan."

Describe in detail the process, actions and steps that you took to achieve your objective and to convert an idea on paper into tangible actuality. While you could achieve the objective individually, one in which you had a leadership role will almost always have greater value. In addition the initiative you took to grab this particular opportunity might be an added dimension in this essay.

The heart of the essay would be your approach to executing ideas - how you visualize, manage, organize, plan, synchronize, and execute.

Like in all the Hallmark Sloan essays the purpose is to judge your approach and attitude in a previous situation since that might be reflection of your manner and method in future situations (at Sloan and later) as well.

Sloan Supplemental Information Essay

You may use this section to address any specific circumstances related to your academic background. (250 words or less, limited to one page)

Sloan Supplemental Information Essay Tips

Use this optional essay to address areas of concern in your academic background that might be detrimental to your Sloan MIT candidature. Academic underperformance, gaps in your academic resume, an earlier MBA etc. are some potential weaknesses that you might want to tackle.

Sloan MIT MBA Application Essays 2008-2009

First get the basic principles right and then move on to the Sloan essay tips 2008-2009.

We are interested in learning more about you and how you work, think, and act. For each essay, please provide a brief overview of the situation followed by a detailed description of your response. Please limit the experiences you discuss to those which have occurred in the past three years. In each of the essays please describe in detail what you thought, felt, said, and did.

Sloan MIT Cover Letter

Prepare a cover letter (up to 500 words) seeking a place in the MIT Sloan MBA Program. Describe your accomplishments and include an example of how you had an impact on a group or organization. Your letter should conform to standard business correspondence and be addressed to Mr. Rod Garcia, Director of MBA Admissions.

Sloan MIT Cover Letter Tips

Write a formal sales document in cover letter format which highlights your key achievements, includes a leadership or team impact example,  explains why you should be admitted to MIT Sloan and also mentions why you are interested in Sloan MIT...gasp.. And yes, this will also act as your "goals essay" (unless you plan to use the fourth Sloan essay to that purpose).

The "impact impact on a group or organization" portion is new this year and tries to compensate for editing out last year's first Sloan essay question: "Please tell us about a time when you had an impact on a group or organization. Describe in detail what you thought, felt, said, and did." Since this is an all-purpose essay a holistic picture of your candidature needs to be presented. Choosing an "impact example" that merges with the overall theme of your cover letter content would help things.

Sloan MIT Essay 1

Please tell us about a challenging interaction you had with a person or group. (500 words or less, limited to one page)

Sloan MIT Essay 1 Tips

For selecting the particular situation for the essay, look back to identify professional or personal circumstances when you found your interaction with a group/team or individual particularly challenging. While this essay could focus on your people skills, leadership abilities, your communication skills or any other relevant quality which you want to highlight, the what, why & how of the challenge and its resolution will determine the strength of the essay.

Like in all essay packages, but even more so here, make the final choice of the example keeping in mind the content, theme and examples you have picked for the other three essays.

Though your essay does not have to be a fairy tale, a cheerful conclusion to this story (and the following ones) would be preferred - why depress people when you can help it?

Key: Describe what you thought, felt, said, and did in the situation - in a way that best expresses the qualities/skills you have chosen to highlight.

Sloan MIT Essay 2

Please tell us about a time when you defended your idea. (500 words or less, limited to one page)

Sloan MIT Essay 2 Tips

What are the general circumstances in which a person might find himself/herself fighting popular opinion? It could be the result of an innovative idea. Or perhaps a principled stand. Or.. well you can think too!

What were your motivations? What was your reasoning? How did you (try to) win over an unenthusiastic or hesitant stakeholders.

It is not essential that this be a "success" story where ultimately everyone agrees with your point of view. A display of your strength of character, robust value system, and/or intellectual courage might be adequate to polish off the essay. However it will be even better if you can additionally showcase your diplomatic communication, persuasive skills and effective reasoning - AND end the story with overall consensus (everybody lives happily ever after!).

Sloan has stipulated a three year time-frame from which the stories can be chosen - increasing it from two years in last season's application. While a five year period would have been welcome, even this seemingly small expansion, would considerably widen the scope of choice for most applicants.

Sloan MIT Essay 3

Please tell us about a time when you executed a plan. (500 words or less, limited to one page)

Sloan MIT Essay 3 Tips

Describe in detail the process, actions and steps that you took to convert a plan on paper into tangible actuality. While the plan could have been individually executed - one in which you had a leadership role will almost always add greater value.

The heart of the essay would be your approach to executing ideas - how you manage, organize, plan, synchronize, and execute.

Like in all the Sloan "thought, felt, said, and did" essays the purpose is to judge your approach and attitude in a previous situation since that might be reflection of your manner and method in future situations (at Sloan and later) too.

Sloan MIT Essay 4

Please tell the Admissions Committee whatever else you would like us to know. (250 words or less, limited to one page)

Sloan MIT Essay 4 Tips

Now this is an Harvard style optional essay - one which you have to answer anyway.

Use it for any purpose you feel will enhance your application, keeping in mind the themes tackled in the other essays.

The content of the essay can range from highlighting specific achievements to underlining your non-work/community activities or describing any quality of substantive value that could not not find a place in the other essays (and cover letter). This could even be made into a goals essay - if it has not been adequately tackled in the cover letter.

Go for it!

Sloan Supplemental Information Essay

You may use this section to address any specific circumstances related to your academic background. (250 words or less, limited to one page)

Sloan Supplemental Information Essay Tips

Use this optional essay to address areas of concern in your academic background that might be detrimental to your Sloan MIT candidature. Academic underperformance, gaps in your academic resume, an earlier MBA etc. are some potential weaknesses that you might want to tackle.

Sloan MIT MBA Application Essays 2007-2008

Use the essays to tell us more about you and how you work, think, and behave. For each essay, please provide a brief overview of the situation followed by a detailed description of your response. Include what you thought, felt, said, and did. Please select experiences or events from the past one to two years. More than that, the essays are a chance for you to discuss your passions, values, interests, and goals. Emphasize those experiences that were most important and meaningful for you — which may not necessarily be those that were most outwardly prestigious. Be sincere and be specific. There is no one "right" kind of MIT Sloan student; in fact, MIT Sloan deliberately builds each class to unite varied strengths and perspectives. Tell us what particular experiences and expertise you will bring to the mix. The essay instructions and questions are included below. We are interested in learning more about you and how you work, think, and act. For each essay, please provide a brief overview of the situation followed by a detailed description of your response.

MIT Sloan Essay 1: Please tell us about a time when you had an impact on a group or organization. Describe in detail what you thought, felt, said, and did. (500 words or less)

Sloan MIT Essay 2: Please tell us about a challenging interaction you had with a person or group. Describe in detail what you thought, felt, said, and did. (500 words or less)

MIT Sloan Essay 3: Please tell us about a time when you defended your idea. Describe in detail what you thought, felt, said, and did. (500 words or less)

Sloan MIT Essay 4: Please tell us about a time when you executed a plan. Describe in detail what you thought, felt, said, and did. (500 words or less)

MIT Sloan Cover Letter: Prepare a cover letter (up to 500 words) seeking a place in the MIT Sloan MBA Program. Please comment on your career goals and those factors which influenced you to pursue an MBA education at MIT Sloan. The cover letter provides a chance for you to discuss your passions, values, and interests, thereby helping us to determine whether you will thrive at MIT Sloan, and how you will contribute to our diverse community. Address your cover letter to Mr. Rod Garcia, Director of MBA Admissions.

Supplemental Information: Use this part of the application to give us any additional information that might help us understand the choices you have made, your leadership activities and skills, and your scholastic and professional achievements. Please elaborate on your personal interests, activities and hobbies, as well as any special circumstances you feel are relevant. We would like to know what you've learned and how you learned it. Please tell us anything that will round out our impression of you as a unique individual.

Sloan MIT MBA Application Essays 2006-2007

Sloan MIT Essay 1: Please tell us about a time when you had an impact on a person, group, or organization. Describe in detail what you thought, felt, said, and did (500 words or less).

Sloan MIT Essay 2: Please describe a time when your team had to arrive at a compromise. Describe in detail what you thought, felt, said, and did (500 words or less).

Sloan MIT Essay 3: Please tell us a time when you advocated for a position. What alternatives did you consider? Describe in detail what you thought, felt, said, and did (500 words or less).

Sloan MIT Essay 4: Please tell us a time when you put an idea into action. Describe in detail what you thought, felt, said, and did (500 words or less).

Sloan MIT Cover Letter: Prepare a cover letter (up to 500 words) seeking a place in the MIT Sloan MBA Program. Please comment on your career goals and those factors which influenced you to pursue an MBA education at MIT Sloan. The cover letter provides a chance for you to discuss your passions, values, and interests, thereby helping us to determine whether you will thrive at MIT Sloan, and how you will contribute to our diverse community. Address your cover letter to Mr. Rod Garcia, Director of MBA Admissions.

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